On Critical Reception of Harry Potter and Twilight Part 8: What the Critics missed (B: Moral)

The Potterdelphia Meet-Up Saturday was a blast — and it was particularly good to catch-up with Debbie, a frequent correspondent, and Demarest, who blogs at ‘To Wander Diagon Alley’ (and knows my books and the many other commentaries on Ms. Rowling’s oeuvre better than anyone I know). I hope to get to their monthly meetings in the future for the Potter fellowship that big city group offers.

Back to our ten part series comparing the critical reception of Ms. Rowling’s Hogwarts Adventures and Stephenie Meyer’s Twilight Saga! When we last spoke, I tried to detail the several surface elements in each writer’s work that critics missed even though they usually restricted their comments to the narrative line. Today I want to discuss the moral level which is, as it is nearly always, very much tied to the surface features of the story. First, though, to review some earlier posts, we have to note that much of the harshest criticism about these two series has been at the moral level — and nearly uniformly wrong-headed.

The Harry Haters, of course, decided to use Leviticus and their Culture War concerns as their lens and filter through which they experienced and critiqued Harry’s years at school. that led to the weird and wide-spread belief that Ms. Rowling’s books were both the “gateway to the occult” and primers for disrespectful behavior, even disdain for all authority. that reflected their misunderstanding of what magic is literary and Christian in the English fantasy tradition (incantational) and what is forbidden by scripture and every revealed tradition (invocational, which Faustian literature portrays as the danger and evil it is). It plus was a good measure of how little we Americans know about schoolboy fiction, in which novels the boys and girls misbehave in their first years and gradually turn into heroic, sacrificial champions of the underdog and the school’s values. The seven Hogwarts novel are an excellent example of just such schoolboy Bildungsroman transformations.

About Twilight, what I have heard and read in concerned posts by Catholic, Protestant, and LDS parents and readers’ online criticism is that Edward’s watching by Bella at night is problematic, at best, probably an “occasion for sin” and temptation teenage boys and girls would not be equal to, and something that young folks shouldn’t be reading considering they might try that themselves. I think, once again, we’re reading a story through the wrong filter and lost story elements that are certainly hard to replicate “at home.” That centenarian, super-powered boyfriend, for instance, who never sleeps and who worships his love interest as a fragile goddess more critical than his own life…

I find that prudential objection understandable, even predictable, but only considering of my experience in the Potter Wars discussing the morality of Harry’s stories with parents and professional Pundits. Like the Harry Haters before them, the Bella Bashers and Enemies of Edward gag on a gnat and swallow the camel. The morality of Ms. Meyer’s story is formed by the selfless and sacrificial love that that young couple feel for each other and, indeed, for their families and communities. Their physical relationship turns on the axis of chastity, restraint, and self-control. The overnight stays only accentuate that meaning; those criticizing the books at the moral level miss the greater part of the story’s moral meaning and value.

But there is a lot more than the critics are lost in both series at the moral level which is so much more interesting than the “Focus on the Family” check list of acceptable story elements.

The first thing, to me at least, is Harry and Bella’s shared disregard for themselves when it comes to “doing the right thing.” Harry has saving-people-thing and Bella, though not magically powered until the book’s finish, plus has little problem throwing herself under the bus whether someone will benefit or a life can be saved by her death. From her decision to move to Forks and the first book’s ending to save mom’s life to her decision to keep the baby in Breaking Dawn and protect Charlie, choosing the hard way that is right without counting the cost is “so Bella” (I saw those words on a license plate today on my way home from church on the back of a car with four teenage girls in it, Twi-Hards, no doubt).

The angst Edward feels about Bella and her safety and the often painful decisions he makes contrary to his desires considering of his convictions take that morality to a new level. He worries, most notably, that he does not have a soul and cannot, consequently, hope for eternal, extraterrestrial life. that belief prevents from allowing Bella to choose that fate for 3 1/2 books. New Moon is largely the story of his choice to live apart from his beloved in the belief that that is best for her. The engine, in effect, of the story drama on Edward’s end is implicitly moral and has its foundation in

his understanding of the soul and an afterlife.

Harry Potter, though he does not talk about his soul, is the story foil to and doppelganger inverted image of an antagonist who invests his soul in physical objects and lives for an ego-persona immortality without love. What drives Harry’s fight with Voldemort and his remarkable freedom in putting his life on the line is his ability to shelve his ego-persona concerns and act on the right thing to do which he perceives through purity of soul.

If the foundation of morality in individual choice is based on a person’s understanding of what it means to be human and what life is about (rather than conformity to social or even religious conventions), both series give us male protagonists that are heroic and throwbacks to the Victorian morality of the Penny Dreadful and gothic romance.

Which brings us to the most weird point that critics miss on that level, weird considering of its obviousness and importance. The Gothic horror genre is, by definition, Calvinistic. The gothic story, in a nutshell, is the Haunted House thrill-show experience written out to highlight for us the facts of our spiritual condition as fallen society living in a world apart from God. As Ann Tracy writes, “The Gothic Fallen world is characterized by the concentration and magnification of fears and problems inherent in the ‘normal’ world. Hence the two worlds are both effectively dissimilar and latently identical…. The Gothic world and the Fallen world are both blighted ones, places of danger, sorrow, and exile, in which the inhabitants’ only hope is a rediscovery of and reunion with the Father and the Beloved” (Ann Blaisdell Tracy, Patterns of Fear in the Gothic Novel, 1790-1830, Ayer Publishing, 1980, pp 315, 327). As much as both Harry Potter and The Twilight Saga is gothic (and your eyes are shut whether you don’t catch the gothic elements), thereupon, they are implicitly a moral text.

I devote an entire chapter of Harry Potter’s Bookshelf: The Great Books Behind the Hogwarts Adventures (have you ordered yours yet?) to the gothic setting of the series which is so complete in terms of using every possible gothic touchstone that it qualifies as heroic parody. Harry, believe it or not, is the gothic heroine, a la Mina Harker in Dracula, and his experiences are a melange of Bronte novels, Jekyll and Hyde, and Frankenstein. Ms. Meyer’s Bronte templates and vampire-wolfmen fetish qualify her books as gothic spin-offs in much the same fashion.

And that isn’t even the most urgent moral element of the books.

It took close to ten years but critics did finally pick up on the politically exact postmodern messages in Ms. Rowling’s books; they now consider Harry Potter a “4100 page treatise on tolerance,” as date magazine put it, and consider the assault on prejudice and the metanarrative of privilege the core and depth of what Harry’s magical education is really about. I need to note they are exact in noting the importance of postmodern morality — and add that, of course, that is only an aspect of the Potter adventures implicit in the story line. The depths of what Harry’s choices are about and what love means are significantly greater than his being the pointman for the doctrines of equality and tolerance.

Though some readers think Bella is a throwback to helpless heroines imprisoned by their men, the stories of her transformation and choices are, whether anything, just as PoMo as Ms. Rowling’s books and certainly not just considering Meyer, Rowling, and their audience live in that historical period. The four and half books recounting Bella Swan’s adventures show every one of the ten qualities of PoMo literature I discuss in Unlocking Harry Potter, most notably the genre ‘double-coding’ and the over-riding focus on the evils of a misleading metanarrative generating prejudice and the consequent importance of choice for self-actualization and freedom.

So the critics, either by focusing on issues that seemed to be about morality but weren’t or just by not getting the right-and-wrong aspects of story setting and detail, missed the moral meaning of the gothic setting, the postmodern fulcrum of choice, and the spiritual bearings Harry and Edward take as the focus for their sacrificial choices. That’s quite a bit, frankly, particularly for those who believe that judging a neighbor is a failing and “bearing false witness” a significant sin, but equally remarkable in professional readers and writers who dismiss a contemporary artist as “terrible” and unable to write “worth a darn.”

And, whether the critics are poor at the surface and moral layers, the meanings they allow such books to have and which they explore, imagine how poor it gets on the allegorical and mythic levels they cannot imagine. Actually, please don’t imagine it; come back tomorrow and let’s discuss the allegorical level of Harry’s and Bella’s stories to see what critics overlooked. See you thereupon!

To be continued.